Based on the outline you worked on, please refer to the feedbacks written below
Based on the outline you worked on, please refer to the feedbacks written below and work on this 20 page paper:
My initial reaction is that you are basically tracking much of what we have already discussed in our classroom discussions. That’s OK if, as it appears, your part IV will give you an opportunity to make sense of the “challenges and considerations” that make regulation on the subject difficult. Given that you are basically rehashing much of what we have discussed in class, I strongly recommend that you use a specific real-world example or set of examples in order to distinguish your position.